Rough cut of Rachel Rhodes - Heartland

This is a rough cut of my video. Some parts are unfinished to it, including the missing titles and most of the video footage.

Rough cut

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The feedback t question 1 where everyone liked the first rough cut.

There is a variation of answers to this question where some liked the lip synching, camera shots or the acting, though the acting was the best that people liked to watch.

Some said that everything was alright whereas the better answers for me are the part where they didn't like my face when i was singing and the close up shots. This is good because then i can now improve on it in my video.

Most people said that the lip synching needs to be improved which is a good answer because now i can go and look again at my video to spot the bad lip synching, jump cuts and to add some more scenes on the couple. 

Location reconnaissance and photos

I want to use this photo because I was thinking of having the couple walk together in the park and the boy can spin and twirl her around. That way it will kook like they share a cute relationship. Though, what I want to do is make the boy disappear which would look like a good effect because then it will look as if the girl had remembered her relationship she used to share with her boyfriend though, it's only because she's grieving for him. 

I want to use this park and the swings so the couple can run around and go on the spinning wheel in the last picture. That way I can capture a show where I can see them spinning and they can look into the camera. I think I would also, use plenty of point of view shots because it can look like it's coming from their viewpoint. For my music video I want to have the park scene because I think it looks incredibly nice to have a couple having fun in the park. Also I think it looks sweet and makes the video look cute and bring emotion to the audience to show them how the couple used to have fun. That way I can have the boy disappear once the couple start walking so, it will look like the girl was just remembering her memories with him. This is because this video is about how a girl´s boyfriend has passed away.

I would call this the house scene, where I want the couple to be playing video games, and I'd get close up shots of them two. Perhaps I might get a home video shot or i'll get them to have an argument. I think an argument scene would be better because then I can get the boy to disappear and then the girl will be left alone remembering those good times they shared. Therefore, i'll film the part where the couple have a good time and then fade it into an argument where the boy disappears.The next scene I want to have in my music video is a house scene. I want this becuase I want the couple to be relaxing together and spending a nice time with eachother though, also at the end I want the boy to disappear because it will look sad in the video. Furthermore I want to add an argument scene in this video because  it would go great if the couple were argueing and then the girl stormed off and watched her lover disappear, so that way she also remembers the bad times she spent with him and how much she misses that.

Another scene I would have in this video is the couple being together in a lab and doing experiments. I believe this is a nice scene because they´re sharing their moments together in numerous places and I can also make the boy disappear in this scene as well to show how happy the girl was with him and then when he disappears, her face would drop becuase it was only in her memories.

The last two scenes I would want are the park and drama scene which would be used for myself as the vocalist because throughout the video I would be cutting to myself often to show my singing. I would want to sit on the bench in the park scene to show of perhaps my clothing like jeans and a shirt because the genre of the song is country. Then in the drama scene I´d probably wear a dress becuse Rachel Rhodes also wears a dress on her front cover.

What resources you will need

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Photographs of possible props (why those props and where they can be sourced)

I have my own guitar which i got from Lidl's and I chose this because there's a guitar playing in the background of our chosen song and it also, suits with the genre; country. 

These props can be sourced from Hainault forest for the first picture, a drama studio in my school and London in London. I chose these props because i want to show the audience how the couple spend their time having fun like in London or in a forest playing with leaves. I also, chose the drama studio because they have these specific lights which can also, be sourced from our school and they can be used for me when I'm singing and the studio as a whole makes it look more professional. 

Photographs of possible costumes (why those costumes and where they can be sourced)

This dress can be sourced from Henry Holland and I chose this dress because my artist also, wears a summer dress and I thought that since, I'd be using her song I wanted to wear similar clothes to her. 

This is what the man would wear and I could properly get all of this from Marks & Spencer's since, they sell office wear clothing and perhaps the jacket from Bank or JD. I chose these for the boy because I wanted him to look smart and not scruffy and that he was a caring young man. 

I can get these from Clarks.

 I can get this from any store, most preferably River Island.

 I can get this jumper from Forever21.

I can get this shirt from Primark. 

All of this would be my second outfit for my singing scene and I chose this because the genre of my song is country, and country stars usually wears shirts and jeans with boots therefore, I wanted to fit myself in with the country style. 

This would be the girl's outfit and I could get these trousers from Sports Direct and jacket from Bank. I chose this outfit because it looks nice and girly and she doesn't need to look all dressed up. I wanted her to look normal. 

Shooting schedule

Day	Scene	Location	Equipment	Costumes	Props	Cast +Crew
14.11.13	The singers scene The bed scene Candle scene Eating scene Chase park scene Gym scene	Drama studio Gabriele's house Cafe Chase park Robert Clack gym	Camera (HD) Dolly Tripod Boom poll Monopod Camera Monopod Tripod Camera Tripod  Monopod Camera  Tripod Monopod Camera  Monopod Tripod Camera Monopod Tripod	Yellow dress Brown boots Pj's Sports clothes	Guitar  Pillows Matches Candle Food	Gabriele(singer) Artiola (director) Gabriele (Director) Artiola (Actress) Gabriele (Director) Artiola (Actress) Arbenit (Actor) Gabriele (Director) Artiola (Actress) Arbenit (Actor) Gabriele (Director) Artiola (Actress) Arbenit (Actor) Gabriele (Director) Artiola (Actress)

Location sheet

Production Schedule Location Visit Sheet Programme Title: Rachel Rhodes - Heartland Client: Robert Clack Writer: Producer: Director: Gabriele/Artiola Date:

Rough Sketch/Explanation of location and key points to note ·   First location at the drama studio at Robert Clack School.  ·  The second at Gabriele's house for the bed scene. ·  Third at Artiola's house for the candle scene in a bedroom where she lights a candle. ·  At a cafe to show the couple eating. ·  At chase park, to show the couple lying on the grass. ·  At the gym - couple working out.  Access to location via: ·  Asking the managers for permission if necessary. Name and number of location contact:

Health and Safety Issues to note: ·  Fire involved, actor has to be cautious.  ·  Has to know how to use the gym equipment appropriately in case of any injuries.

Potential Filming Problems : ·              May forget the camera or tripod and camera may not work. ·              Lighting may be wrong. ·              The weather could be bad. ·              Could break the 180 degree rule ·              The camera's battery could run out. ·              Costumes could be wrong on that day. ·              No continuity. ·              The shot may not be right.

Additional Notes:  (map of area/weather forecast etc) Make sure to bring in extra batteries. Bring in spare clothes for another shot. Check the weather forecast.

Animatic storyboard

This is a short clip of my storyboard animation that explains what shots will be included in my music video.

Shot list

Shot List
Scene	Shot Number	Description
Bedroom scene Park scene Bedroom scene Park scene Drama studio Park scene Drama studio  Park scene Drama studio Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Drama studio Science room Park scene Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Park scene Drama studio Science scene Drama studio Science scene Drama studio Park scene Park scene Science scene Drama studio Drama studio Science scene Drama studio House scene Drama studio House scene Drama studio Drama studio House scene Drama studio House scene Drama studio House scene Drama studio Drama studio House scene Park scene House scene Park scene Park scene Park scene Park scene Park scene Park scene Park scene Park scene	1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61	Middle shot of a girl holding her teddy bear. You get a good view of her face and emotion and what she's doing.  Side shot of me singing. You can see the guitar clearly and my face.  Back to the girl grabbing her teddy bear, same middle shot. Back to me and the side shot, singing with a clear view from my waist and above. Another side shot of me but in a different place. Have a clear view of my face though, not so much of the guitar.  Back to me and the side shot, singing with a clear view from my waist and above. Can see my face better and face expressions. Can't see the guitar.  Back to me and the side shot, singing with a clear view from my waist and above. Long shot. Shows most of my body from my head and below, can see my face, guitar and what I'm wearing clearly. Midi shot - Can see my face better and face expressions. Can't see the guitar.  Long shot of the couple walking down the park. Midi shot - Can see my face better and face expressions. Can't see the guitar.  Side shot - can see my face and guitar clearly. Side shot and midi shot - can see another view of my face and the emotion on it.  Extreme close up of my face - can see the sad emotion on it clearly. Midi shot - can clearly see both actors doing something with lab tubes. Midi shot of me playing the guitar and singing. Midi shot - Can see my face better and face expressions. Can't see the guitar since from the waist and above. Close up of the actors spinning round on a swing. Can see their face and how happy they are together. Midi shot - Can see my face better and face expressions. Can't see the guitar since from the waist and above. Extreme close up of my face - can see the sad emotion on it clearly. Midi shot of me playing the guitar and singing. Side shot and midi shot - can see another view of my face and the emotion on it. Midi shot of me playing the guitar and singing. Side shot and midi shot - can see another view of my face and the emotion on it.  Long shot of the couple walking then see the boy disappear and the girl walk alone. Side shot and midi shot - can see another view of my face and the emotion on it and a bit of me playing the guitar. Midi shot - can clearly see both actors doing something with lab tubes. Midi shot - can see my face but not guitar. Midi shot - can clearly see both actors doing something with lab tubes. Midi shot - can see my face and the emotion on it. Close up of the couple laughing while spinning on a swing. Long shot of me sitting on a bench and singing. Can see the guitar clearly and my face. Midi shot - The boy has disappeared and the girl hasn't noticed until she wanted to show the tubes to him. We can see her sad emotion on her face. Close up of the guitar and me playing it. Midi shot - can see my face and the emotion on it. Midi shot - The boy has disappeared and the girl hasn't noticed until she wanted to show the tubes to him. We can see her sad emotion on her face. Extreme close up of my face - can see the sad emotion on it clearly. Long shot of the couple watching a playing a game. Extreme close up of my face - can see the sad emotion on it clearly. Midi shot of the girl wanting to show the boy something. Can see his serious face and her exciting face. Long shot of me playing the guitar and can see my face. Close up of me playing the guitar. Midi shot of the couple starting to argue and can see their face expressions. Midi shot - can see my face and the emotion on it. Long shot of the girl angry and storming off. Close up of me playing the guitar. Close up of the girl crying and can see a long shot of the boy sitting but can't see neither of their face expressions. Side shot of me from another view singing and can see my face and a bit of the guitar. Close up of a side shot of me singing and can clearly see my face expressions. Close up of the girl looking at the boy and and can see a long shot of the boy sitting but can't see neither of their face expressions. Can see a point of view long shot of me walking and spinning round with the guitar. Close up of the girl looking at the boy and and can see a long shot of the boy disappearing but can't see neither of their face expressions. Long shot of me walking with my guitar towards the sunset though, can't see my face only my back. Midi shot of me singing. Can see my face expressions and me playing the guitar. Long shot of me walking with my guitar towards the sunset though, can't see my face only my back. Midi shot - The couple are hugging and taking photos together. Midi shot of me singing. Can see my face expressions and me playing the guitar. Midi shot - The couple are hugging and taking photos together. Midi shot of me not singing anymore. Can see my face expressions and holding my guitar.  Long shot of me walking with my guitar towards the sunset though, can't see my face only my back.

Risk Assessment

Risk Assessment

Group Members:                                                                                                Location:

Hazard	Person(s) at Risk	Likelihood of Hazard 1 – Extremely Unlikely 5 – Extremely Likely	Severity of Hazard Outcomes 1 – Very Low Risk 5 – Very High Risk	Risk Level (Likelihood + Severity) 2	Measures to Take to Manage Risk	Risk Managed? Y/N
Burning finger  whilst lighting the candle	Artiola's finger	1/5	2/5	2	use safety lighters and take care	Yes
Break gym equipment or muscle	Arbenit or Artiola	1/5	2/5	2	Use safe equipment nothing too heavy	Yes
falling into the lake	Artiola and Arbenit	3/5	3/5	3	Not film near the lake	Yes

Contacts

Emergency Service:           
Robert Clack School:           
Other Contacts: